Review Detail of NikTitanik866 in Crownless King System
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There are a lot of problems with this novel. Words are constantly misspelt and even left out. The flow of the text is confusing, often switching from one line of thought to the next without a visible connection. It feels like the Author is just steamrolling through it all. Character design is also pretty lacklustre because the characters have no defining trait you can see, only the ones that are told to you which makes them lack credibility. Anyhow, if the grammar is fixed and a more fleshed out background is provided this could reach 3.8.
Crownless King System
ESH
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I've read till chapter 10. If you really do a full novel edit, sure I'll give it another try. P.S. I know the review wasn't the clearest and it was most probably quite harsh, but if you want to attract more active readers you need to step up your game. Paying more attention to details will certainly enhance the quality and consequently, the number of readers.
ESH:Thanks for the review. I'll work on the problems eventually by giving a full novel edit. I hope you can give another chance when the time comes. If you don't mind I'd like to know till which chapter you read so I can have a better knowledge of the matter.
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ESH:Thanks for the review. I'll work on the problems eventually by giving a full novel edit. I hope you can give another chance when the time comes. If you don't mind I'd like to know till which chapter you read so I can have a better knowledge of the matter.