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This is the first time I'm reviewing which says a lot from my side. This is the best MHA Fanfic that I have come across in this site, and from the look of things one of the best overall. The author has slowly built up the world around Sakuya and is not afraid to stray and go away from the story. The MC has character that is vastly different from the rest that are made by different Authors. Her personality is reasonable due to her powers so nothing feels forced just because the author did so. The MC is overpowered but OP done in a right way; she isn't the OP MC who hides in the dark cliche She's the MC who will not hesitate to destroy any sort of organization that will try to go against her. She has no qualms about erasing someone from existence and isn't a goody two shoes. In short, it's everything a reader would love. Everything thay hate wouldn't be here, why? It's because she explores her potential, no BS plotarmor, author doesn't try to nerf MC for no reason and actually KNOWS how to write with an OP character Most authors after making an OP character, they would for no reason nerf them just so they could fit them with the world (Ex: The wish is Instant Mastery but has to practice the skill for months, yet the author tries to defend it still) And most important of all, everything makes sense! None of the characters have a 'clone' personality where they will act like everyone else, unique to be exact. And even the side characters have a relation to the world, they aren't just tossed aside for added chapters. Anyway, this is my review as a person who writes a fanfic himself, so I know how great this person writes. I'll give the Story a 5 Choco Milk out of 5 Choco Milk

Time Stops When I'm with Her. (MHA)

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I love a MC that wouldn’t hesitate to erase evil organizations cuz honestly the stupid morons who just put AFO in jail and not killed him just asked for a jailbreak and all these death and chaos 🙄 serious villains need to die