Review Detail of yawaai in LIVING AGAIN TO LOVE YOU (BL)

I don't even know what am I doing. I'm just a...brainless potato who do not know english very well. Please don't bully me for creating this story. It feels great when I am imagining it that's why I'll rate it with a 5 but I don't know if you have the same feeling after reading this since I don't know how to express myself, furthermore it's in english...(｡•́‿•̀｡)