Review Detail of Suoshi in Yin-Yang Harmony System

Item: Yin-Yang Harmony System
Rating: 4.8

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SuoshiLv22yrSuoshi

Pretty good writing style. I have no major grammar or vocab errors to report. But the world background could do with a bit of shaping up. Other than that, not bad.

Yin-Yang Harmony System

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SuoshiLv2Suoshi

i wrote this review in the early days of the novel lol, i dunno how it's improved

DraskelClan:really? the English in this isn't the worst I've seen, but it is pretty close to bad.

2yr

Princezik14Lv13Princezik14

are we reading the same novel ??

2yr

DraskelClanLv15DraskelClan

really? the English in this isn't the worst I've seen, but it is pretty close to bad.

2yr

PumpkinKatLv1PumpkinKat

English committed sepuku

2yr