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I love the way you introduce the characters. It's different from biologies, and I love that. The way you change POV really smoothly, I think that. I can see the attitude of the character through their words while speaking. I will give your story 5*

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Thank you for your review! I will make sure to keep the POV switching as smooth as possible!