REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) đ Nice Synopsis! I am hooked! Definitely will add this and read for more!
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COMMESky_Flower922:Thank you very much for your positive review. I am very glad that you like my work. I will keep working hard and lets hope that it will reach million views in the future. Thanks bro!!