The story has a rather interesting idea. Love how the story begins with the discrimination received by the main character. Make the character, get a reason to move forward. But unfortunately, there are many mistakes in male and female pronouns. Sometimes the main character becomes a man and then in the next sentence becomes a woman. Makes the reader a little dizzy to determine who the character is being told. However, this can be edited, and the story becomes something even more interesting. Moreover, the sentences are neat and easy to read.
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