Review Detail of in Ice Demon In DxD

mate it's good your only problem is that some characters feels holo to me no emotional attachment to them but most is good what making me not give it 5 stars even though i like it alot is grammatical errors you be talking about a male and then he becomes she his her it just hurts my brain 😂 my advice is use grammatically it will help correct errors it's free and very Good alot of other author's use it and it helps alot besides this i love this and good job mate