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Review Detail of Minxs in System Journey to Godhood

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Minxs
MinxsLv103yrMinxs

Like the idea of a system itself trying to become imortal. Definitely a unique take on the system genre. Definitely need to see more too get a better feel on a story like this. The beginning is a very standard cultivation novel with solid writing. One thing I would warn the author about is the quick pace. I understand your trying to get into the story but take it slowly and make sure to set a strong foundation. For example, a reason for why the system wants to cultivate. This also falls into the category of understanding where you want to take the story. Otherwise, I look forward to what you do with this interesting idea!

System Journey to Godhood

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BigMarch
BigMarchAuteurBigMarch

thanks for the review and the advice! really appreciated it!