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Review Detail of _Readian_ in I Created a World of Magic!

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_Readian_
_Readian_Lv53yr_Readian_

I just want say that the story development is to fast. Just in the chapter 1&2 people and the government already believe that magic is real and there is no a single doubt at all. I mean to say that I want to feel a sense a development where the MC struggle or whatever it is to achieve his goal? Btw, good job author for the novel

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I Created a World of Magic!

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_Readian_
_Readian_Lv5_Readian_

*Chapter 5