Great concept though. Good grammar with an interesting power. Why mc get poster wanted dead alive? For plot also why not make shadow slaves? I am probably going to drop this novel. MC ok ish while the chapter are a little to short for me. Author you shouldn't change the pov to much I could tell you are kinda struggling with that. Though that's up to you just do you since it's your book.
Igris_69
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COMMEshadow slave ? Thank you so much for your comment, it's really very constructive! I'm a beginner, so the pov's are complicated Ig, but I think it's so enriching to do them, so I'll try to improve, thank you. And as for the chapters, I'm going to try and make them longer (around 1,500 words, I think).