This story is certainly one of a kind, with the unique backstory and hooking start! Did not find any issues with grammar or inconsistent writing, it was more or less quite an enjoyable read! It's interesting to see how much a broken heart can affect a person, changing them from the worse to the better... or maybe the other way around. ;) This story has great potential; looking forward to more chapters!
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