Review Detail of srevdar in A certain God's Chat Group

I really enjoyed it until chapter 20... You essentially introduced several characters and relationships which you simply decided to cut off... Hephastus... Loki... Athena... what was the point??? It was those relationships that got me interested in the story... The Father - Daughter dynamic, the friendship with Athena and the ambiguous relationship with Loki... as if it wasn't bad already, you completely nerfd the MC to the point of him having to become a mortal elf... what was the point of that? Then you sent him to the Lower Realm, when you didn't even do a bit of world building in Heaven... what was the point of that... not only that, but the MC turned into... well... a generic fan fic character that has a Chat Group.... the millions of years time skip was unnecessary, the transformation to a Shota elf was unnecessary, the cut out of all the interesting characters was unnecessary, especially Hephastus... why even make her his step daughter, when you essentially destroyed that plot line a few chapters after. You also mention how he and Loki seem to have feelings for each other, and then destroy that with a time skip... you make Athena take care of him for millions of years and then you destroy that by turning him into a mortal and then send him on his way... Look, I'm not usually one to leave a bad review, but when the story went fron one extreme to another in 20 chapters, I felt the need to write this. Sorry, but I will be droping this.