The book is off to a great start, even though It needs more polishing but the chapters are great tho and I can't wait to see how far the story is goingâ€đ
Lorimar
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COMMEThankyou so much for taking the time to comment. I truly appreciate all constructive criticism and suggestions. đ How do you suggest i polish it? I love to write, but this is only my second story....... total newbie! đ€Ș Im glad you are interested in continuing to read and i hope i am able to deliver a story worthy of your time. Thankyou đxx