sorry bro although the story looks good but i dont like multiple people pov or mc sometimes its confusing and is pain in the ass to read. .. .hope you understans
Kghost2015
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COMMEYour first opinion is dead on. I'll say I was twisting and turning with one (Nikolai) in the beginning since he's serious then his other informal self.
Mmmmmh:I haven't read it yet but, I wanted to say your story is a cool idea adding the Primis group to your story. (Unless it is one of the other groups)
I haven't read it yet but, I wanted to say your story is a cool idea adding the Primis group to your story. (Unless it is one of the other groups)
Kghost2015:That's cool, thanks for reading :)