Review Detail of funmaxwell in Legend Of The Remnant Saiyans

the story premise is interesting. But I don't even want to try to read this story because I can already tell it's practically unreadable mess from story synopsis. as you can even get that mostly grammar error Free. actually I think I've tried to read this before and was practically unreadable. if I remember correctly. I'd be really interested in reading this after you put it through some serious proofreading and grammar checks.