Review Detail of ExaltedCrow in Second World Online: Darkness
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Just here to ask for all the boys (me included) that wonders if he starts at the game release or after the game has already been released? I hate when MC starts after the game has realeased..... Also I see the R-18 tag, but no romance and no harem tag. Does that mean it will only be casual flings/one night stand? As long as it's not solo romance, ntr, or girls that have been raped you have my interests. asking here because reviews are a nice place to find answers, instead of having to read the comments on chapter 1.
Second World Online: Darkness
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First of all, he starts at the game's release as per when he bought the necklace in chapter 1. Secondly, the reason I put R-18 is because he will have a girlfriend but no harem. There will also be no casual flings or one night stands neither will there by solo romances, ntr, or girls that have been raped. In the third or fourth chapter you will see a girl thanking the mc for saving her. However, the mc will only open his heart to one person and that person is not that girl. This is for clarification that many people think will happen to the mc's love life and so on so forth. Also, I have decided to limit the mc's plot armors to give him a overpowered start but he will have to win on his own power later rest assured.
Hmm sounds fine then. Not too big of a fan of it not being harem, but shouldn’t matter as long as you focus on the story rather than the romance.
DarknessApproaches:First of all, he starts at the game's release as per when he bought the necklace in chapter 1. Secondly, the reason I put R-18 is because he will have a girlfriend but no harem. There will also be no casual flings or one night stands neither will there by solo romances, ntr, or girls that have been raped. In the third or fourth chapter you will see a girl thanking the mc for saving her. However, the mc will only open his heart to one person and that person is not that girl. This is for clarification that many people think will happen to the mc's love life and so on so forth. Also, I have decided to limit the mc's plot armors to give him a overpowered start but he will have to win on his own power later rest assured.
I could make it a harem but would it make sense that his indifferent attitude would care for them? I'm planning to make a volume 2 of this book once I finish it but it'll be an entirely different genre. Maybe then I can make it a harem if his attitude changes during my plot setup. However, right now in this first volume, there isn't much hope for it being a harem. Also, I'll make a new book once I'm done with volume 1 of this book to take a break and it'll probably be a harem.
ExaltedCrow:Hmm sounds fine then. Not too big of a fan of it not being harem, but shouldn’t matter as long as you focus on the story rather than the romance.
I'm not trying to tell you to change your story. I know how hard it is to write, and trying to fulfill others wishes just makes it harder. Some enjoy harems where MC loves the girls, I love harems where MC collects them. So it could kinda fit MC if he is a bit lustful? Harem or not I'll read your fic when I have some time^^ #BigHaremSect
DarknessApproaches:I could make it a harem but would it make sense that his indifferent attitude would care for them? I'm planning to make a volume 2 of this book once I finish it but it'll be an entirely different genre. Maybe then I can make it a harem if his attitude changes during my plot setup. However, right now in this first volume, there isn't much hope for it being a harem. Also, I'll make a new book once I'm done with volume 1 of this book to take a break and it'll probably be a harem.
Yes it is quite hard to write but I always take my reader's wishes into consideration. My next book will be a harem so you don't need to worry about that. I could make him have a temporary harem in this book but later on it wouldn't really make sense so I'll lay off on that idea for now.
ExaltedCrow:I'm not trying to tell you to change your story. I know how hard it is to write, and trying to fulfill others wishes just makes it harder. Some enjoy harems where MC loves the girls, I love harems where MC collects them. So it could kinda fit MC if he is a bit lustful? Harem or not I'll read your fic when I have some time^^ #BigHaremSect