Review Detail of crazyspecter in Reincarnation as a Peerless Martial God / Cultivator with Sharingan!
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I dropped it because I can't bear with the writing style of the author ...if he writes the story in his own language and then he uses Google translator to translate it in English , he would have way better results .. the story is pretty much a copy paste of the original with the difference being the MC having a sharingan so no character development, no world building outside of what you can find in the original novel
Reincarnation as a Peerless Martial God / Cultivator with Sharingan!
blazerboe2020
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nope I am okay with changing and even not changing the canon story of a fanfic but doing so in a logical way ...if you give the (transmigrated) MC extra powers from the beginning and one moment the MC knows the plot, but a second later he forget the plot without a reason to force the original plot in a fanfic then it isn't coherent with the story or if I am to be brutally honest it is poor plot planning
StrikingWave:You would have been probably one of the first person to say 'why did you change that, don't change that' when he changes something.
never said that ...but you could have him unlock the sharingan and more detailed memories of the plot later on ...if you give all this from the beginning but you don't change a thing in the canon it is poor plot planning ....go see dark lord dumbledor or the marvel fanfic with the legacy from the 3 sennin to have an example of how to follow (or not follow) canon while creating a somewhat coherent plot line with barely any hole or forced plot points
blazerboe2020:the main character is still not really on his feet, and you already want him to conquer the world.