Overall the story is really good, a lifeless kid that down to adventure and challenge something that he would not challenge before. At some point, the relations between the character seems kinda off but it's still a good developement. The background is promising with it's sci-fi things, it's a fantasy of monster, adventure, and sci-fi. A unique combination indeed. Kudos for the writer to come up with this combination!
Nikola_Niko
Liked it!
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