Ok. There was originality and creativeness. Grammar seems a bit wrong on some cases. Characters are presented and described as the story goes on and I liked that. All in all your story is about to create a great future. Just don't stop till you finish it. That's all I could say basing from my level of criticism.
jungkooks_luna
Liked it!
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