Review Detail of PumpkinKat in The Rise of the Black Plain

The flow of the story has too much fluff. Long winded explainations for things that doesn't build onto any plot/character development shouldn't take up half/whole chapters. I find myself skipping paragraphs often that are totally irrelevant. It feels like trying to hit the word count for an assignment. Try reading chapter 34 and 36 skipping over 35, you won't miss anything too important.