Review Detail of IdleWolf07 in Fairy Tail: God Slayer - The Path of Life and Death!
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the story good i guess. but there are some words make reader confused. like : magic assasin of God life and death? its better write as life and death God slayer magic. what is Xids? thats wrong word i guess. the true word is Exceed. please better fix this.
Fairy Tail: God Slayer - The Path of Life and Death!
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