Review Detail of BananaChicken in The Tale of Weiz Ludenberg

Item: The Tale of Weiz Ludenberg
Rating: 4.4

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The story was well written. The first paragraphs are quite confusing due to the dialogues being so close to each other. The next paragraphs all completely well and I suggest that you should the describe the world background more.

The Tale of Weiz Ludenberg

Kisirin

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KisirinAuteurKisirin

Oh I see, Thank you for reviewing my novel, I will try to work on not compiling them in one spacing so that you won't be confused in the next chapter, and I will take note of your suggestion. Thank you again, and I hope you enjoy the next chapters that I will make.

2yr