Review Detail of JinVonRey in Connor Wants to Be A Hero but Is Actually a DICK!

I'm here to tell you that thanks to the feedback I've been getting from you and from my editor, I managed to know about the mountain of grammatical mistake and the plot holes, and I happy to tell you that it has been fixed up to the third chapter without taking out any event from the story rather than that it has more content right now. Therefore I'm open to criticism so please leave a review here to let me know what you think.