Review Detail of Crackgear in The king most obeyed

From just a speck of notice of the first chapter, I had a little bit of a cringe. The writing quality is pretty mediocre but even if thats the flaw, the story is quite good. A proper and stable occurence in the storie's progression. Writing quality though, still is a little lacklustre. Especially when it comes to examples of sentences that starts with 'GAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!' Story developement is pretty decent for now. Only having two chapters, it needs a littlemore detailingand expressive volume. The author may need to up an ante with his writing sentences with a bigger and longer time put in. Character design is good but rather stereotypic and a little nonsensical here and there, still an ******* writer may or may not need to practice more but still an A for effort. Continue writing and as you get older, you realise your mistakes here and there. World background is a little dark for now since it only has two chapters for now. Continue practicing lad/lass. You can get better! Keep up the good work!