Review Detail of Greyskul75 in Phantom Ride:Ride For Eternity

Holy Crap! This SUCKS! First off it seems to be ripping off a manga, I got the title from seeing the manga and hoping for a novel version. This book is not a novel version of this story, it's someone DESCRIBING the comic SCENE by SCENE. The grammar is atrocious, it is incredibly jarring, and has zero story flow, almost like they were trying to write a screenplay, but not as well done. I read the first couple "chapters" and honestly if I could rate it less than one star I would. This is a disgrace. I normally am pretty forgiving with amateur writers, but this is just unforgivably bad.