Review Detail of uflesh940 in UCHIHA UZUMAKI

My first criticism is the grammar. It's definitely among the most poorly edited stories on webnovel. As a general criticism, I would like to state that the story as a whole is very bland. Our MC is just this emotionless blob. The plot is rather similar. I dropped this nine or so chapters in, and the MC has yet to face even a minor setback. As a whole, it's not a bad story, but it definitely needs work.