Review Detail of HotDaug in Reborn with Mr. Satan

This is my first ever novel so there will be some errors here and there, so dont be afraid to point them out. Im hoping to improve my work, so leaving comments/reviews is much appreciated. and i will shamelessly rate it 5 stars, Oh btw im planning to write some plots myself and not always follow the original siries anyways i will be under your care *lightly bows*