webnovel

Review Detail of jeanpierregerardo in Reborn with Mr. Satan

Détail de l’examen

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv53yrjeanpierregerardo

The story is interesting, but the way you wrote it makes you dizzy, decide how to put it, there are also errors and among other things, more information is missing. - but the idea is. - It is a story that can have potential as well as No, it depends on how you handle it.

Reborn with Mr. Satan

HotDaug

Aimé par 4 personnes

COMME

Réponses1

HotDaug
HotDaugAuteurHotDaug

Thanks for the review, this is my first novel so doing this kinda thing is a first for me and i hope to improve my work so thanks for the heads up.