Review Detail of star_bem in Legend of the White Haired Cultivator

Very interesting story so far~ the Lim Su Ren and White Flame interactions are adorable! I'm hoping for more of those. Nevertheless, the grammar and punctuation, and the story setting (like describing the room where the characters are for example) could do more improvements so to give more depth. Overall, the flow and pacing is good and it's fun to read~