Review Detail of Fellbane in Born of Darkness: Family reunion.

The premise is good but the grammar and sentence structure could use quite a bit of work. The author also tends to write the characters speech and then spend an unusually long paragraph describing what was happening as they said what they said. It makes the story feel a little disjointed The MC is also a bit of a brooding edgelord who likes to hide his face behind a cloak and deny any positive emotions or feelings. Also a male tsundere with a deliberately ‘cold and indifferent’ way of speaking so it can be a little gross. But hey, he genderbended Bell Cranel and made her a super yandere so that’s a plus. Dont believe what people say about NTR btw its just two girls that have no romantic relationship with the MC at the time doing a little bit of slight yuri, nothing heavy.