Review Detail of NoobLord114 in The Shinobi of Straw Hats

Item: The Shinobi of Straw Hats
Rating: 4.8

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NoobLord114Lv63yrNoobLord114

if not for grammatical errors 5 stars rest done good not like other fanfics, butchering the one piece story which oda beautifully created.

The Shinobi of Straw Hats

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SkaysthaLv5Skaystha

that's point but it's like author is just copy pasting man . I say don't add drastic change in plot but just add a little change in plot if you insert character

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