hey the book is a good read on ch.363 but I'm having a hard time understanding the Mc. Author are u making your Mc an incel? yes he has 1 female friend but acts like he hate women finding him attractive says he is not ga8y but never mind. I get this isn't a romance novel or Heram but he is a 18yr old man at this point and should have interest in women in some fashion. other then that story has good pacing and then Mc isn't some psycho for the most part, will be interesting to see how you change that since he seems to be the type if someone he cares about dies he will no longer be neutral but evil and the day that happens I will drop this story.
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