When the author says the novel is basically trash they don't disappoint. Like aside form grammar and all of that stuff that make a story proper. You need a good foundations it relates to the MC and the background , I get u wanna make MC op but fuxk think, you make a character so Op he's gonna basically gunna walk through the world. why Viking ? if he's gonna be a god where they are basically no other gods or someone of his equal exist to make your story interesting . I read the first chapter and think damm, I know u said ur doing this for fun but it's like your 1 brain cell of taught when into this. The wishes. utter lack of creativity and thought, his backstory u sped through that like a fat kid on his first slice of cake. Like I feel if I going on it's simply torture to my poor brain.
Anonymous2000
Liked it!
COMMEAnonymous2000:Good thing I tortured your brain,it fills me with so much joy.