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Review Detail of ThePandaCritic in I Reincarnated In Vikings

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ThePandaCritic
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When the author says the novel is basically trash they don't disappoint. Like aside form grammar and all of that stuff that make a story proper. You need a good foundations it relates to the MC and the background , I get u wanna make MC op but fuxk think, you make a character so Op he's gonna basically gunna walk through the world. why Viking ? if he's gonna be a god where they are basically no other gods or someone of his equal exist to make your story interesting . I read the first chapter and think damm, I know u said ur doing this for fun but it's like your 1 brain cell of taught when into this. The wishes. utter lack of creativity and thought, his backstory u sped through that like a fat kid on his first slice of cake. Like I feel if I going on it's simply torture to my poor brain.

I Reincarnated In Vikings

Anonymous2000

Liked it!

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Anonymous2000
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Good thing I tortured your brain,it fills me with so much joy.

ThePandaCritic
ThePandaCriticLv1ThePandaCritic

Anonymous2000:Good thing I tortured your brain,it fills me with so much joy.