Hi author, Upon reading your work, I was astonished to read fresh words and spice to your writing however, please be mindful of the grammatical errors as well as spelling. Re-check your draft and correct them. I see that this work of yours is really interesting and how you play with words are really commendable. I also noticed that your chapter name is not catching my attention, I would recommend if you would name them base on the chapter's main topic/event. The way you built the world was great too, and I'm looking forward for reading more of what's in your world. Please continue updating and Goodluck. Regards, Glenstonx
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