đđ Really enjoyed binge reading this! Iâm curious to see whatâs gonna go down next. Just like any story, there are grammar and spelling mistakes, but I donât really care because I was too interested in the story haha :) Some work could be done on the backstory; I found it a little hard to keep up at times. Sometimes flashbacks werenât defined clearly enoughâas there Were a few errors in consistency when it came to tenses. Nonetheless, I really loved reading this, and I recommend anyone reading to give it a go! Iâll be keeping a look out for update. :)
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