Review Detail of illeannne in 木水中水廿水

Very nice! Please provide more explanation to some of the terms, sometimes I feel confused as to what's happening. I haven't read stories with cultivation systems in a long while so this was nice! I saw that some of the sentences lacked appropriate punctuations, which isn't too bothersome but can be fixed. All in all, Jake is a madlad..!! Keep going, author ^^