Review Detail of Spelloyal in Deleted

Basically, another generic fanfic with op mc. In this the mc collects slaves and subordinates with an ability that gives control of their lives and deaths. The MC basically looks like those evil gamers using everything to get subordinates with ease, but telos as a subordinate starts to value their lives as much as their own. There are good and bad generic fanfics, I would say this one is not bad, I personally did not like it very much, but it was not annoying and boring like some others. For me what really bothered me was the instant mastery cheat, in addition to being a standard cheat that spoils most fanfics, the author does not explain how it works and uses it inconsistently. In a moment he spends hours immersed in weapon training as if he is understanding something, when he should just lunge and instantly master any weapon. In the meantime, the MC avoids cultivating because of the pain he would experience when he immediately dominates cultivation, as his instant mastery should make him instantly reach the highest level of cultivation, which is not at all reasonable. Cultivation is like doing exercises, even if you have a perfect understanding of it, you still need to practice the movements to slowly develop muscles and become stronger. If instant mastery would automatically push the MC cultivation to the maximum, you should do the same instantly giving perfect muscles when doing any physical exercise like push-ups or working out at the gym. In short, it's a generic fanfic with nothing special, but it can be interesting for those who specifically like op mc with instant mastery, creating an army of subordinates. If you like this you will like the fanfic, as well as any other generic fanfic of this kind.