My first impression after a few chapters - you know how to write! You don't struggle, like most of us, not English speakers, with tenses, style or grammar. It's your advantage over the rest, use it well! It's a pleasure to read it... The plot is addictive, the characters are expressive. Everything is in place. You're doing a great job.
KeiKeiYuki18
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COMMEKeiKeiYuki18:Omg, thank-you so much! I'm trying something new and I really want to see how far can I take this story. So I'm happy you liked it~!