Review Detail of kkarx in Fire and Ice: A Ruler's Fate

Ending the novel with twenty chapters is really short and the sudden ending is confusing. This novel is my first and lacks grammer but surprisingly it gained some fame. Though I became rash about my decisions of adding a second volume while the first volume hasn't finished yet. Please understand that in irl, I'm busy with personal stuff. In this novel, I had focused my concentration so it became better than expected. I want to explain why I didn't update the chapters even though I found multiple apps with important functions to upgrade your writing and novels. I find correcting my grammar is difficult but when I wrote this, I had no idea that there's some web that could check your grammar in no time. Anyways, I hope everyone had a good experience in reading this novel. Thank you! [img=recommend]