Review Detail of EphraimL1 in God's Ascension

Hello guys, Author is here. I'll be honest with you: I don't know what the f*ck I am writing. What do I mean? Well, everything started some days ago when I was watching an anime and there was this scene with an awesome power that hyped me up. I was so excited that I decided to write my own story just to satisfy my delusional dream of having superpowers. Then a contest about mythologies popped out, which I always loved to study, and here we are. I am just going with the flow: obviously, I have something in mind but it's just for reference. I don't know how long this novel will be, hell I don't even know what I will eat for dinner tonight. What matters to me is bringing a story that makes you excited, that makes you feel immersed and that make me proud of myself. If you have questions, ask, if you find plotholes, don't hesitate and criticize me, If you like the story, tell me what you like. Communication is the strongest power between me and you, use it. I hope we will have an enjoyable time together. Bye Bye ^-^ /