The plot itself is pretty interesting and keeps you guessing because of the POV of the story. The writing quality is up and down. There's a little too much repetition in description and speaking. The story develops a bit slow for my taste, but that is probably different for everyone. The characters weren't very deep in terms of roundness and explanation, but I guess this is an exception due to using existing people. The setting was not the best and I feel that the author could have appealed more to both the imagination and senses. Overall I like where the story is going but I think there is always work to be done!
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