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Lol why dont you guys post reviews tell me if its good or bad out of 5000 people who have Been reading this nobody has posted a reviews il appreciate it if you posted a review!
Help Me, Dear Pirate Lord!
Nobodyjustawriter
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Okay uhm i did all of teh chapters and since im new at this i Know it wont be perfect bur tell me if it needs more work.
amaturewriter:gl
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oh okay I guess I'll try to fix its my first book so I'm new just uh I'm busy so il fix it later also thanks for telling me.
amaturewriter:ur structure sucks...I want to read ur bk but half way through 3 rd chp I gave up. try to fix it. separate the paragraphs and dialogues. when its all clustered its hard to read and understand, you have to mentally fix it in ur mind to understand what u are reading
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jack_lonbdon:oh okay I guess I'll try to fix its my first book so I'm new just uh I'm busy so il fix it later also thanks for telling me.
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Nobodyjustawriter:Okay uhm i did all of teh chapters and since im new at this i Know it wont be perfect bur tell me if it needs more work.