Review Detail of John_sins1 in Sacred Gear Creator (English)
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The story i think is okay, but the english is seriously terrible, genders are completely wrong 90% of the time, the sentences are hard to understand and require you to reread them a few times to understand what is happening. I understand it is translated using google translate but seriously it is really poor. It is a shame because i think this could be a great fanfic if the english was better.
Sacred Gear Creator (English)
L4DR1X
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John_sins1Lv12John_sins1
No worries, i will delete this review and re do it later, you really need to fix the he/she him/hers mistakes and the story will be much much better.
L4DR1X:I am currently out of free time, but when I can I will correct these errors, thanks for understanding.
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake
John_sins1:No worries, i will delete this review and re do it later, you really need to fix the he/she him/hers mistakes and the story will be much much better.