Review Detail of Neatio in World Dream

The entire story so far is a great tale. Everything from the initial shock coming from both the MC and the reader as they learn about a mystic, new world, to the humble beginnings of the protagonists. However, the best part, for me, is the dialogue. A lot of the time it's a vibrant show of emotions that few tend to focus on. It's refreshing, to say the least. Continue the good work sir!