Review Detail of DarkKnight32 in I Became A Demon Lord

this is in no way a 5 star story but it also isnt trash, some people might like it but for me having every secound sentence a system message is not my cup of tee. mc is annyoing, doesnt do anything by his own will so just a puppet for the system even when he does something he asks the system like its his mum whoever wrote this is probably still very young. sorry if you not..... its a good start for the author but not something I would read or wait for a new chapter. the writing quality is not that bad very simple sentences just the way i like it(my english is not that great). but talking to the system every second just ruins the whole reading expiriance and mc acting like he cant use or understand his skills when he goes trough pain to gain it is just stupid. i would say this is a 2.8/5 star story the author didnt think trough when he wrote this and just yolos it every chapter writing like a headless chicken i recomand you write what you want this story to be and the world bacground before you start writing about your guy if you starting with the whole writing thing its for the best to start writing fanfiction in them you already have the story and the world background offered and all you need to do is put a little twish on the story and there you go.