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Missrealitybites
MissrealitybitesLv143yrMissrealitybites

This book has a really good story. I can imagine scene by scene. There is only one downside, the lack of conversations/dialogues which could bring the characters personalities and the story to live. If done properly (with more scenes and dialogues to detail the story), this book can easily go to 50 chapters, which a standard short novel.

The Sun and the Moon

Cressielost

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Thank you for reviewing the book! The lack of conversation was actually because I was trying a new style of writing. I wasn’t exactly expecting anyone to read it. I’ll take your review into consideration! Thanks again <3

3yr
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Missrealitybites
MissrealitybitesLv14Missrealitybites

Oh, how interesting! I hope you'll find the style that you like and can convey your story the best. Good luck! I enjoyed your book :) .

Cressielost:Thank you for reviewing the book! The lack of conversation was actually because I was trying a new style of writing. I wasn’t exactly expecting anyone to read it. I’ll take your review into consideration! Thanks again <3
3yr
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