Nice story there but I would advise, you proofread your work and remove the typos. Otherwise, the story flows nicely. Like the concept as well as the narration. Keep up the good work.
NoahSky
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Thank you 😊 Gramer is my weakest point. Im working on it, soon I will try out grammerly app. I love constructive criticism 😇