Review Detail of KeiKeiYuki18 in The Bet

Hi! So your story is interesting and I love the dialogue between each character. Your description also gets better in later chapters. I'm still reading it, but so far I see nothing majorly wrong with your story. Can't wait to see how far you will take this story of yours and the new elements you will add to keep the readers engaged! Wishing you the best of luck with your story~!