Review Detail of Pixie_Auri in Life’s Pareto Equilibrium - Between the Choppy Waves & Serene Field.

This is an interesting novel. The emotion pours out of the characters, and the descriptions are really poetic. My only concern is with the plot development, where I feel like it takes a while to see where the novel is going. The first chapter is a bit heavy on the information load, but apart from that, good job.